Thursday 19 February 2015

THE "BIRTHDAY OUTING"

"He's staring at you"Ade whispered in her ear.
His words chilled her like minute icicles on her skin.

She knew what they meant.It was like the whisper of a phantom in her ear.In an instant she was panic stricken.She felt tremors down her spine as she turned to look.

The man who was staring at her was gorgeous to behold.
He was tall,lean muscled with the dark intense eyes of a seducer.He didn't just stare,he devoured her with his eyes.In his gaze was a demonic-hunger she knew meant only one thing.

She tore her eyes away from this Dark-angel and stared at Ade.
"Please,"she pleaded with him.But Ade's mind seemed already made up.

He grinned an evil grin as he took another drag from his cigarette.

"Please,....its my birthday"she said to her boyfriend as more people entered the bar.
She knew the Dark stranger was still staring at her. In fact,she'd known from when they'd entered the small bar in V.I.
Most Lagos-players would stare at a pretty Girl for briefly(or at least respectfully)especially when they knew you were standing with a guy who was CLEARLY. Your BOYFRIEND.

But not this Dark stranger.
Hell No!
He stared with enough audacity to make you uncomfortable.

She'd hoped he'd get bored and stop staring at some point.....he didn't.

And now she was in trouble BIG Trouble.
The kind of trouble she didn't need on her birthday.


"Ade!"she began, trying to be as firm as possible.But her words were drowned out by the loud music released from the speakers.

She felt Ade's tight grip on her arm.
The music was loud. But not so loud that she couldn't make out the words;
"...let's go!"from Ade's lips.

Then he pulled her ROUGHLY and dragged her out of the bar.
Few people barely even noticed the slight commotion of the smallish girl being dragged out violently by the Tall lanky man.
Mr Dark-Angel was already talking to another Girl.


OUTSIDE Ade dragged the reluctant girl to the car as people stared curiously at them


''Ade please it's my birthday, don't do this today'' Anita was pleading as he shoved her into the vehicle.

All through the drive, Anita knew what was coming.This was suppose to be her birthday...this wasn't supposed to happen today.

''You see how you embarrass me in front of people?'' Ade was saying as they sped through Ikoyi.
 As usual, he didn't seem to care if he hit someone in the process.

YOU SEE HOW YOU EMBARRASS ME?? Now he was shouting and driving recklessly at the same time.

''Ade...slow down you're......!

WACK!!!!!! went the back of his hand across her face.She felt an explosion of pain on her  nose as her head was thrown back by the impact of the blow.

''SHUT UP!!!SHUT UP!!!!'' He was screaming.He'd nearly lost control of the car due to the violence of the assault.

''DON'T EVER  INTERRUPT ME, DO YOU HEAR ME???...DON'T EVER!!!!!!!''she knew his rage.Even as warm blood oozed from her nostrils,she knew there was no stopping him.

STUPID GIRL!!!! AFTER EVERYTHING I'VE DONE FOR YOU, AND YOU'RE FLIRTING WITH ANOTHER MAN.....IN MY PRESENCE?????

''I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING......." but once again,the back of his fist cut her off,

WACK!!!! Across the eye faster than she could blink.She knew there was no avoiding it.A BLACK EYE was inevitable......again.

"SHUT YOUR DIRTY MOUTH YOU ROTTEN SLUT!!!!!!"His fist made contact with the side of her face again.As always, an instant blurriness cloaked her vision. There were times during these beatings she was very sure she had gone blind.In the blurry darkness of her vision she  could hear him;
STUPID STUPID WHORE....WHY DON'T YOU RESPECT ME?? WHAT DOES HE HAVE THAT I DON'T???"

WACK!!!!

Through the pain and deafening roar of his voice she could hear her mother's voice in her head;
"I wash my hands off you if you continue to hold on to this relationship.....he will kill you one day!"

Anita hadn't received any calls from friends or family that morning of her birthday.Why? Because, Ade said;

''Your birthday is MY business not theirs. I DON'T WANT ANYONE CALLING YOU TODAY.....UNDERSTOOD???''

And so she'd switched off her phone to avoid trouble......funny how the trouble still found her.

"GET OUT OF THE CAR!!!!" Ade barked. She hadn't realized that they'd gotten home.They were at his house already.She stared at the tall red gate to his two bedroom flat with terror.

The worst was yet to come.She thought. Once they were inside the  house, he would near beat her to death.

The last time he'd literally Knocked her out cold.When she'd come to, he was standing over her with a bucket of water looking as charming and concerned as he was on the day they first met.

"I SAID GET OUT AND OPEN THE GATE" In the semi-darkness of the car,she could see the rage in his eyes.
If she opened the gate, what was waiting for her on the other side was far worse than whatever he was doing to her in the car.
There was no security man at at the gate, why?The last one was sent away because according to Ade;
"I just don't like the way he stares at you"

Save for Anita's whimpering, there was silence in the car. All was still as it always was in Ade's neighborhood that time of night.

Ade just glared at her for a few more seconds.
She determined in her heart not to get out of that car no matter what he did to her.

Ade smiled at her.
''So you don't want to obey me abi?''there was a strange ''delightfulness'' in his tone.As if she had just handed him a Christmas present.

He shrugged and stepped out of the car to go open the gate.

As soon as he got out of the car, Anita SNAPPED  into action.

She hopped into the driver's seat.More blood dripped from her nose.
For a split second,She watched Ade struggle with the gate.The car's engine was still Running.

She knew what she was about to do was dangerous. Ade could kill her for this.
But she knew going into the house was even more suicidal .This was her birthday for Christ sake!!!

"WHAT??????" Ade yelled as his face had become a mask of pure hate. It seemed he couldn't open the gate for some reason.That frustration adding to the Shock of seeing her behind the steering wheel made him seem reeeeeeally pissed.

She had to act fast.
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According to her statement to the police, ANITA claims she intended to put the car in reverse when the Vehicle "accidentally accelerated".

Inspector Iyang whom was one of the first officers at the scene observed that Mr Ade's body looked like it had been run over at least two times.Eye witnesses claim that Mr Ade was run over three times and each time, Anita was heard screaming; "DIE!DIE!!!!!"

Anita denies this of course.Claiming that she only lost control of the Car and ran over Mr Ade ONCE.
She claims  that at no time did she yell out;"DIE"

Inspector Iyang noted that embedded in one of the front tires of the Vehicle were few of the Victim's Teeth.

He truly isn't sure of what to make of this.

The investigation is still on-going



Life is A Choice my Friend
So Choose Wisely.
Enough Said










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16 comments:

  1. She should have run him over a long time ago.

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  2. It is sad that women still wait for the worst to happen before they end a violent relationship. No woman deserves to be abused by a man. I pray the police would do good by investigating what type of relationship Anita and Ade had. At least to help reduce her sentence...

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  3. I would have said "that serves him right" but I'm not going to say it.

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    1. Lmao. U already did say it.
      Hehehehe. *evil grin* I'm so glad she visited MFM sometime in her life and perfected their prayer pattern on the demon's spawn Ade. Die!!! Die!!!! Die!!!!! By tyre!!!!!
      Muah ha ha ha ha ha ha!

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  4. Was so hurt reading this till I saw she entered d driver's side n I started grinning but it didnt turn out d way I had expected. If it was me, God forbid cos am not foolish to stay wit a man after even if its quarter slap, not to talk of beating, tufia! I would hav reversed d car and sped off to my relation's house that have a grown up male that will beat d idiot blue black n red if he dares cross! Etc.... Cos killing him will put me in trouble with d law plus mental state. She will neva remain easy. I think dat incident will b of constant terror to her tru dreams n oda ways. Its her fault cos even her parents warned her but ha reply might have been- we love each oda and he has promised to change. Story for d gods! Ladies beware of over possessive partners, dats wia the abuse starts. That one slap today might lead to hanging of neck at orthopaedic tomorrow... Choose wisely-in Opus' voice

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  5. She should have run over him till he was unrecognizable. But seriously, I thought she was going to drive off. But I can't blame her, not after what he just did to her.

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  6. War against battery. If he hits you....... Run A Way (RAW). No need staying in an abusive relationship. U do not need him to thwack the heck of ur face before u leave. Emotional blackmail is part of it. Constant dissing and insults to u. Making u feel insecure they all fall in d same category. Life is too short to be endured.

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  7. Rotfl....serves MR beater right... she should claim temporary insanity if investigation shows motive and intent to kill...
    But she shouldn't killed him shaaaa, hehehe, since it's just fiction, it's not badt dou....

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  9. What? Such twist...wow! I'm stunned. I actually thought she was going to drive off. Die Ade! Die!! Die!!!

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  10. Thought she was going to drive away.........I always make it clear to any guy I go out with..." D day u raise ur hands on me, that is d last day u'll see me"......only if it comes unexpectedly o.....haa cos I won't sit down and wait for u to baptize me with ur palm or belt b4 doin sumtin....talk anyhw sef....I walk out anyhw......I give u my time and all......u dnt expect me to eat ur shit too

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  11. I actually thought she will run away wt d car. Dts good opus

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