Tuesday 18 August 2015

"FACT OR FICTION" ......you decide


Ledum looked at the clock in her office, wondering what was so urgent that she had to drop everything she was doing in the office. But Baridor had sounded frantic on the phone few minutes ago.
“Come to Nina’s house, it is an emergency” she had said. What emergency, she had declined to say.Ah..well...!


 Knowing her twin, it could be anything or nothing. Baridor had only one setting; Hyper.

She was an exact opposite of Ledum, whom was always calm and digested events before reacting. It always amazed people how different the girls were. Even as kids, you only needed to looking for the one who couldn’t stay at a place to know which was which.

Physically, they were exactly the same.




Ledum got to her partner’s office, to tell him she was stepping out for a moment. She and Ngeri ran a very successful medical practice.

They had graduated top of their class, and gone on to open up their clinic together.Business wasn't bad(if you looked passed the constant power failure and fuel/disiel strikes)

 Just as she stepped outside the building, a strap on her sandals ripped. She hissed angrily, but decided against going back to her office.

She would use the flat slippers she had in her car.


She drove for about five minutes, listening to the radio and singing along and thus didn’t notice the car's temperature gauge rising until the bonnet belched,sending out thick black smoke.

She parked by the side of the road, and sat in the car for a few minutes wondering her next line of action. She had no idea what to do when a car was overheating.Her knowledge of vehicles didn't extend beyond;Start-Drive-Fuel-and-Lock-Car-when-you're-done.

She called her mechanic and waited for him to arrive.Took him about an hour.By then the car's interior was like the interior of a fully functional oven.

 Then she handed her keys over to him, and got into a cab.



Ledum was stuck in traffic ten minutes later.

She was getting frustrated. The cab had barely moved three or Four feet in five minutes. Hence the term "Go-slow".She thought.

Traffic was at a standstill. Apparently the engine of a Large Fuel Tanker up ahead had a mechanical version of a heart attack.



She looked out the window, and watched how the Keke drivers were dribbling between cars like skilled footballers .

They seemed like her only salvation from the Hold up.

She had never boarded one in her life, but she was in a haste. She paid the cab driver, and flagged a Keke down.Funny how they always reminded her of those old Bollywood Movies.She half expected some Indian guy to Pop out of them,singing a Bollywood tune.


She haggled with the Keke driver for a few minutes, before boarding.

The driver started his engine, and she heaved a sigh of relief.For a second,the rickety damn thing sounded like it were about to explode.

She noticed him take a swig out of a plastic bottle from under his seat.

The foul smell of drunkenness permeated the air. Ledum was shocked. The man was drunk (or at least smelled drunk)and drove pretty recklessly.


“Oga abeg stop me, I no dey go again” Ledum said to him.
“Wetin dat one come mean eh? Madam abeg no vex me O”
“Oga no be by force O, If you wan die, die alone. Stop make I come down” Ledum yelled above the sputtering sound of the engine.

She was becoming agitated.

“Madam I no fit stop for here. You wan police to catch me? Abi dem send you?” He drove straight into a pothole...(or small crater) and almost collided with another keke.
“Ah....!Oga you no wan stop? I go jump O”

Ledum protested as the Keke flung her from one part of the back seat to another.
“Na you sabi” He retorted.

Ledum watched the road, deciding to jump off the keke at the nearest opportunity. She got one soon, when the Keke slowed down a bit.

She jumped out of the Keke and in mid-air realised too late that she had miscalculated her trajectory....and the speed of the Keke.

"Chineke...!!!"Was the last thing  she heard the Driver scream before her head hit the pavement,cracking her skull open.

She didn't feel a thing.She died instantly.

The driver of an oncoming car, had to swerve into a ditch, to avoid running her over. She lay there,......motionless with her cranium broken,with blood oozing from her head.

People gathered around, and finally she was rushed to a nearby hospital(i.e Thirty minutes after onlookers had just stood there staring at her lifeless form,snapping fingers over their heads and saying things like;"Chie!!,..dis Fine girl..Nawa o!"

The doctor pronounced her DOA (dead on arrival). 



Baridor wondered why it was taking her sister so long to arrive. She needed her to see this with her own eyes. She hoped Ledum arrived before Humphrey left. 

“Ledum likes to doubt me” she said to herself. She had told her sister that their cousin’s husband was cheating on her, but Ledum disagreed, saying Humphrey was a perfect gentleman.

 Lo and behold, she had come to visit her friend Nina, just in time to see Humphrey going into one of the apartments in the compound. Nina had informed her that his girlfriend lived there.

Baridor was excited, “Ledum would eat her words today” she thought to herself. Then she got the call.




Baridor was besides herself with grief. She stared at the lifeless body of her twin, and a shiver ran through her. “It’s all my fault” she thought to herself. Joe Ledum’s fiancĂ© was also there, as were some other members of their family.

They decided to bury her that same day. “No need to keep her body in a morgue that is bad omen”, the elders said. 

Ledum was buried that evening amidst tears from her loved ones. Joe was against the idea of such a hasty burial, but it was not his decision to make. “You are not yet married to her” her family members reminded him.

Later that night, Baridor jerked awake sweating profusely. She had seen her sister in her dreams, wailing. She didn’t sleep till it was dawn. Ledum’s voice kept haunting her.


“Why? Why?” Ledum asked.
“Why did you people bury me alive?” she cried.



The next morning, Ngeri rushed to their house. He had also seen Ledum in his dreams, it was the exact dream Baridor had had. The family called the grave diggers, and went to exhume the body. They opened the casket, and Ledum was there lying on her side, with her clothes torn and the insides of the coffin scratched and torn apart. She was dead.



FACT OR FICTION?....you decide.(the truth will shock you)



Ivy Brown



LIFE IS A CHOICE MY FRIENDS
SO CHOOSE WISELY
ENOUGH SAID








99 comments:

  1. Replies
    1. My dear I'd brb too, need to turn my brain on...

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    2. Lolz @turn my brain on.

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    3. Bbb, you always carry first you bi Warri person?

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    4. Thanks for the break from ROTC.
      I was beginning to be overwhelmed.

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    5. I prefer a quick follow up on ROTC!

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    6. The title should be 'A series of unfortunate events '. Chilling, all the warning signs were there to dissuade her from going.

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    7. This story isn't funny, Igbo people no de bury like that. Fiction shaa!

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    8. Www.diaryofagidistoner.blogspot.com for EROTICA #SEXUAL STORIES

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  2. Pic d lady is holding up isn't clear

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    1. #IREADOPUSTJKWRITES. dats wat it says.

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    2. The paper reads;# I READOPUSTJKWRITERS, I can borrow you my reading glasses!

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    3. #IREADOPUSTJKWRITES

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    4. yeah writes not *writers* tanx!

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    5. @Iyke, lend you my....not borrow you my. We are making this borrow borrow thing Naija issue.

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    6. Okeyoooo, my class teacher!

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    7. Abeg wait oo how can anonymous person be complaining? Please reveal yourself so we know who we are addressing. Thx n God bless

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  3. Biko this is too dreadful even for fiction! God forbid! I don't want to imagine what that girl went thru! Kai

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    1. From frying pan to fire! what a waste!

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    2. I have heard stories of people confirmed dead that later woke at the mortuary, eye witness account of those who witnessed someone waking from coffin at the graveside. No one should be in a hurry to rush someone down 6ft.

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    3. Why should she be buried the same day she died?

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  4. Wow! Fact or fiction? Strange things happen mehn...

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    1. Hmmm is all I can say! Strange

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    2. J,you are repeating the question ooooo! fact or fiction?

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    3. Nnaaaa, it is a pathetic thing if it happened shaa o! @Opus, na u go tell us weds na fact or fiction, I no fit shout!

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  5. OMG!!! I can't deal mehn.

    Pamscrib.blogspot.com

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  6. People will be so disappointed not to see Rise of the clans12. Lol

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    1. Am no one to be disappointed!

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    2. The new story is in order...Opus should even post one or two different stories before continuing with ROTC, that way, our appetites would be well whetted.

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    3. Bless you, Chuksie.

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  7. I no dey happy at all. Firstly, you starve us of part 12 of Rise of the Clan. Secondly, you feed us with such a sad story. See wasted life! Abeebo no be work before.

    OpusIvy, please note that you need to post a VERY lengthy part 12 of ROTC. Any intention to get it to part 20, receive fire! I cannot come and give myself hypertension while checking every 5 mins for ROTC.

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    1. Hahaha @intention of extending it to 20 receive fire

      Minding one's biz is key...as the cheating in-law will still not stop

      Nma's Blog 

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    2. Abeg @Anon, hold your fire joor! So you don't want me to receive that kiss from Pam? Come o, it could be Pam posing as Anon....why did she choose Pt 20 to send fire to? Make un check my reasoning naa.

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    3. Abegi.
      Anon has been around for a while.

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    4. @Chuhks, please arrange to meet this your Pahm so we can hear word. Pahm cannot have 3 different names naa....

      Biko @Pahm, please DHL this kiss that Chuhks is looking forward to.

      @Hawt Mrs, God bless you. Can you imagine Chuhks' misrepresentation ....

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    5. @Anon, my bad...no vex dear. Seriously laughing @DHL this kiss lai! Lai! I will be patient.

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    6. Chuks don't worry, I'm not going anywhere and Dat kiss is all urs if it gets to 20.
      Opus, ehmm, u know Dat d 2 both of us are padi. Don't let it get to 20 cos I don't want to embarrass Chuks with kisses. Lolz.

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  8. Near fact, but it is a fiction!

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  9. Whattttt!what a horrible second death!cracked skull doesn't mean death o.i chose Faction a little bit of fact n fiction

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    1. Nne, this is fiction. That's the only I can relate with that story and still be happy.

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  10. Fiction.
    Even though my heart is in my mouth.
    Fast.
    Adrenaline-pumping.

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  11. What kind of story is this bikonu ooo!!!. I'm petrified... The images this story has created in my head eh!

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    1. Scary. snooping things shaaa!!!!!!!!!!1

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    2. Take it as it is @Anon pure fiction. The only way you can the peace you desire, u hear?

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    3. *you can have the peace*

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    4. Biko delete dem pictures.

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  12. Pure fiction. I'm not a medical professional, but if the Nigerian setting for an accident is anything to go by, that lady bled out and died there. No one offers help. If you do, be prepared to answer police case. My take, pure fiction, but a nice read anytime.

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    1. I guess the people that were suppose to help her were busy taking pics of her bleeding head!

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    2. @Nimsy, I concur...@Iyke, this taking of pics is becoming annoying.

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    3. Seriously, it's getting crazy. I heard of an abandoned baby dumped somewhere and instead of people to do d needful, dey just stared and took pics until d baby died. So shameful really.

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  13. Haaaaaaaa!!!! Nawa.. I'd rather forget I read this story o.. which kain decide opus?

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    1. My thoughts exactly...i'd rather have a forgetful memory when it comes to this kind of story.

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    2. @Aitsweet and Boo, I agree with both of you.

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    3. Hahahahah @forgetfuk memory.

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    4. Yea! I meant forgetful memory.

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  14. Serious Gobe. I really hope it's fictional. Else...
    Lips sealed

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  15. I don't want to think about it take more of deciding if it's friction or not, what a horrible way to die.

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    1. Have u watched 1000 ways to die? I puked wen I tried.

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  16. Fiction. Better be fiction.

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    1. We no gree on this being fact, Opus you don hear?

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    2. So we're both #TeamFiction on this one, Kween.
      I miss you small.

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  17. Too scary,mere visualizing it gives me the creep..cant deal pls,fact or fiction.
    Opus pls stop putting us in suspense on ROTC

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  18. Al we r saying..give us ROTC XII...

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  19. It's fact o. Dis world self, full of reckless doctors. DOA my foot. D gal was still alive n d lazy doctors declared her dead.

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    1. You to have a girlfriend who was a party animal but passing her exams in medical school. We offered some courses in their dept in 3rd and 4th year, babe always shied away from meaningful discussion. One day, I had to tell her "if na your kain doctor full everywhere, I no go near any hospital". Truth is sometimes you wonder how some of them managed to pass their exams and get certified after housemanship. Well shaa, the sharp ones abound, and our prayers should be that God should never allow our paths to cross with those lousy coconut headed ones.

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    2. Are you for real, Chuks?

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    3. *Used to have* @Hawty, very real....just forget talk. What of the one in PH that forgot cotton wool inside my aunt? When he performed the surgery again, he forgot scissors....The husband applied Carl Lewis, Ben Johnson and Usain Bolt all joined. This was a respectable hospital and a doctor that came highly recommended for fibroid operation. Make I stop joor! See idiot doctor certifying someone DOA!

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    4. Come to think of it,
      even if she had survived,
      She would have prayed for death.
      Slim chance with a cracked skull..
      She'd have definitely become a veggie.
      Sad!

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    5. Still be alive with broken skull?

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  20. Fact! Watched something similar on dstv. 1000 ways to die or something like that
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  21. #Fiction. Someone with broken openup Skull would die instantly and never waaake up in a grave. Opus don start again

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  22. Ok..fIction...cos i wouldn't want my head to go to fact.

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  23. Like my mum would say" those were signs for her not to have gone"
    #fiction tho

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    1. Yeah.
      Foresight.
      A feeling of foreboding.
      I'm not superstitious but I pay attention to details.

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  24. On a different note, who is responsible for Ledum's death?
    1. Ledum for not taking care of her car
    2. The trailer driver that caused the traffic
    3. The drunk as a fish NAPEP driver
    4. Her twin who called her for amebo
    5. The cheating scoundrel that gingered the whole seeing is believing melodrama

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    1. @ anon, let's just say that when a female doc jumps straight outta speeding tricycle on miscalculation, should we still ask who is responsible for her death?

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    2. Destiny.
      Death was winking at her.
      Her time was up.

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    3. @Cheezy, if her twin did not call her as though there was a life threatening emergency, she would not have left work. If she took care of her car, she would not have entered the cab or abandoned her car to take keke napep. If there was no go slow, she would not have alighted from the cab to take keke. If the keke driver wasn't drunk, he would have driven with care and not scare her out of her wits into making such a miscalculation. If the cheating husband chose to be faithful to his wife, there would have been no emergency amebo to attend to...

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    4. All the factors mentioned,but the keke man and her twin sister will be tried for manslaughter!

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    5. The Fates spun their wheel...
      To be or not to be...
      Surely, Ledum they chose to kill...
      For reasons we can neither think nor see..

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  25. Fact or fiction.......all I know is, the story sent shivers down my spine, almost made me stop sipping from my can of goldberg #WarriPikin

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    1. For real.
      My heart was literally in my mouth.
      Gripping & captivating.

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  26. All these factors are the things that define our country nigeria. The stress too much jor.

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  27. *SPEECHLESS* bt na correct fiction b dis!

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  28. Fiction, too unbelievable to be true

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  29. Hmmmm...... this can't be true.

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