Tuesday 9 June 2015

INTO THE NIGHT



 He clenched his hands.....tightly.

 His nails bit painfully into his palms almost drawing blood.

Death was a beautiful thing.He thought.

He felt the darkness inside him rising.

He trembled slightly, sweat plastered the singlet unto his skin.

He loved this feeling.

As he stood by her window.

He  looked in and saw her talking to her roommates.

He watched her strip, laughing and at ease.

Death was sweeter when they were beautiful.He thought.

He longed to crush her neck and watch the lights go out in her eyes.

Nothing would satisfy the darkness inside him more .

But now wasn't the time, it wasn't the time. He thought.

He tore his eyes away from her window.

As he walked away from the female Hostel towards  the staff quarters, he felt the darkness again.

The hunger for a kill was stronger.

He needed an escape for the night.

 From a distance, he heard a dog bark.

Then he heard it again.....................!.

 The little pest was barking persistently.

  He strolled towards the barking.






 "WHO could have done such a thing?...... It's inhumane" a girl said to her friend the next morning, on their way to class.

They passed by Buchi, who was going in the opposite direction.

"That person has to be a beast, a monster....or something" the friend replied.

These little twats should be more careful how they talk.Buchi thought to himself as
 he turned around, and began trailing them.

The entire school was agog with the gist of how Rex, the dog belonging to the HOD of physiology had been butchered.

The dog had been ripped open, and its internal organs had been removed and kept in front of the HOD's house.

The tongue of the dog was nowhere near the scene.

It was found nailed to the door of the school auditorium, and a message had been written underneath it, with blood. The message was; "DEATH IS COMING".

Students had different versions of the story, and different interpretations of the message.




BUCHI gave the girl a little water, it had been three days since he lured her to his "temple" (he just loved calling it that).

She was very weak, and could barely talk. His eyes trailed down her naked body, but she didnt stir his loins.

What a waste he thought.

It would have been so much fun to take her one more time.
.
He had had his fill of her body already.

Time to dispose of her.

"Next time, mind who you call a beast and monster, but ooops!"Buchi said playfully as he put his finger to his lips.

"...... there would be no next time."

He brought out his dissecting kit, and lay out his tools.

This was the best part.

Lovingly laying out his sharp and shiny instruments.

His loins stirred, as it often did whenever he had such a task at hand.

The girl screamed, or tried to... He looked at her, and trembled ever so slightly.

His eyes roamed over her supple flesh, as he thought about where to start.

He took a really sharp scalpel, and cut into her stomach. "Why dont we conduct an appendectomy first?"he said as her muffled screams filled the room.

Perfection takes time. He thought....and a steady hand. Medical school is not a waste after all


He wished she wouldn't struggle so much.Now there was blood every where.....ah well.....!




TWO weeks later, Angela kissed Abdul goodnight in his car, and he zoomed off. She turned around to go into her hostel.

Suddenly,

.....STRONG arms grabbed her, holding her to the ground before she could scream. She felt a prick on her right arm, and it was lights out.

Angela opened her eyes, and above her was a mirror. She was on an operating table, and had a white gown on.

She screamed.

"Nobody can hear you" came a voice, and Angela turned her head. "Olaitan, what is happening here" she asked, recognizing her roommate's boyfriend.

"Is this a joke?" she asked
"Oh it is not a joke" came another voice. She couldnt look towards the voice, as her head was restrained with a belt, but she didnt need to see the owner of that voice to know who.

"Buchi, what are you guys up to?"  she asked, slightly annoyed.
"You would find out soon enough dearest" Buchi replied.

Angela lay on the table for over twelve hours. She wondered what exactly was going one. Several times, she heard indistinct voices, but crying out for help had yielded no response.

Buchi came in a couple of times to check on her. But he wouldnt respond to her pleas. He   looked strange, and acted even stranger.

She woke up to the sound of the door being opened. It was a guy she didnt know personally, but had seen hanging around Buchi a couple of times. He walked up to the table, and let his hands roam over her breasts, smiling in appreciation.

Then he loosened the straps holding her to the table, and ordered her to get up. She fell to the ground, as her legs were numb from being tied up for so long. He helped her up, and carefully led her outside.

Angela looked around her, searching for a route to escape. They went through a dark passage, and out of what looked like an abandoned building.


There were about a dozen men, wearing white loin clothes and standing in a single file. Her hopes of escaping were shattered.

 She was led to a platform, where she was made to stand facing the men.
 What seemed to be hundred of candles, were lit all around them. Angela realised that she was too weak, and knew she must have been drugged.

From the platform, she could see the faces of the men clearly. She recognized almost all of them, including the dean of her faculty, the slimy old geezer that had tried to get in her pants when she was in 200level.

 Mr. Adeleke was also there, that shocked her. He was such a morally upright man (or so she had thought) He was one of the few lecturers in her department who didn't receive bribes.

Buchi came towards her, he was tying a red loin cloth. He stood in front of her, and took a slimy dirty substance from a big calabash beside her, and started giving her a bath. Her mind wandered to the day it all began.



 They had been in form six, and she was the most popular girl in school. Buchi was a pimple faced nerd, who obviously had a huge crush on her and she knew it.

Being silly teenagers, she and her click decided to play a prank on Buchi. So she wrote him a love note, and put in his desk. When he saw it, he turned red.

She was nice to him for an entire day, that night was social gathering, and she led him behind the curtains that covered the stage, and made out with him until he was stiff.

Then she made him take off his shorts, and on her cue her friends pulled down the curtain. The entire school saw his tiny pecker.
She joined in the laughter, and in his eyes she saw undiluted hate.

They had met in the university, he was in the medicine and surgery department already when she gained admission into the biochemistry department and she being all grown up, had apologised, and he had forgiven her... or had he?

"Open your mouth" came the command, and she was brought back to reality by the metallic taste of blood being forced into her mouth.

"Chew" another command from Buchi, as he forced raw flesh down her throat. It made her nauseous and she vomited. A slap across her cheek, told her he meant business.

"Chew" he ordered again, forcing more raw flesh into her mouth. She chewed and chewed. When she swallowed, she nearly regurgitated, but forced it down.

 "Open your mouth" he said ... When he did, the men cheered, and began a frenzied dance.

"Welcome to my world. Here I am the ruler. You just ingested the heart of a virgin" Buchi whispered into her ears, pointing towards a table, where a little girl of less than ten, lay peacefully as though in sleep, except that her chest was wide open.

 One by one, the men danced to the table and dipped their palms into her chest, licking the blood that came into their hands like thirsty dogs.

The drumming stopped abruptly. The men bowed face down to the ground, and began chanting incoherently. Buchi removed his loin cloth, and dance towards the little girl. He dipped his hand into her chest, brought out a lump of flesh, and ate it.

 Then he came to where she was tied, and urinated on her. After which he tied his loin cloth. The men rose up and took turns urinating on her, each of them saying prayers for different blessings they wanted.

When everyone had had a go, Angela emptied the entire contents of her belly, which wasn't much and she heaved and heaved until only water came out, soon nothing came out.
The guy who had led her out, came towards her bearing a basin. He emptied the content of the basin on her, Petrol... Angela screamed knowing what that meant.

Buchi untied his loin cloth once again, and gryrated around her in circles, holding a red candle.

Before he threw the candle at her, Angela had already resigned to her fate. As the flames engulfed her, her last thoughts were that he wanted her to see that his pecker was no longer small.
Her screams filled the silent night, and the flames lit up the night.




LIFE IS A CHOICE MY FRIEND
CHOOSE WISELY
ENOUGH SAID

51 comments:

  1. So creepy but comes with a really sstrong message.

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    1. Not too creepy shaa. Nice one opus. But dis buchi guy shaa.

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    2. Gory.
      Sick.
      Vivid.

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    3. Hmmmmm scary....nice one opus!

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  2. 😨😨🙊 Opus oo

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  3. Opus, I will go back to the story but the opening reminds me of Stephen King. I've seen one of his seminars. Opus, follow me on twitter! Omoyemi1

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    1. How can we follow anonymous?

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    2. Ref: Anon 1.42. - Iyke David. I didn't even look at things from your perspective, Opus got me open mouthed with this tale. Anyway, I am on twitter @omoyemi1O1A1ojo. I strongly recommend that you read "Grammy Week" which is an excerpt available for a free sampling from my ebook. Go online to check in the details... Opus, I am still waiting for you to follow back... :)) Mrs Opus, it's a writer thingy, lol.

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  4. A gathering of killers.....buchi is going to be a serial killer extraordinaire. Lord protect our kids from bad peers and influence.

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  5. hmm... I got three words: voodoo fanatic psychopaths!!!

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  6. Scary! Let's all watch and pray!

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  7. Hmmm scary! This world is full of wickedness. Lord have mercy.

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  8. this is dark but very good KEEP IT UP OPUS

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  9. Barbaric nd horrifying so no purnishment for buchi and his cohunt? Hmm surely karma takes time to befall its victim.

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  10. Buchi and his minions, it would make a great series, serial killer.

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  11. Hmmm...Opus, you av started o. Why horror story nau?

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  12. hmmmmm opus , there is gonna be part two right? b'cos I want to believe justice will prevail o

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  13. Love this! Shout out to all the horror fans out there! Hehe

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  14. *sobbing uncontrollably for Angela. Oh no !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can smell burning flesh * I think I'm gonna throw up.

    Oyibo

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  15. Jeez, my whole body broke out in goosebumps! Opus, your mind ehn.....

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  16. Jeez, my whole body broke out in goosebumps! Opus, your mind ehn.....

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  17. This is disgusting yet captivating. Never being a fan of serial killers stories, they make me want to throw up. Still a nice story though.

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  18. Oh my God! So scary! Dt Buchi is something else. Unforgiven spirit, dts d case here. Dis world is really deep.

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  19. Give me the unrepentant mistress. Give us Amaka

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    1. Amaka is now a born again Muslim no more runs!

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  20. Captivating as always... and somewhere in this rotten world we live in, things like this happen all the time.

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  21. P.S.
    Opus when are you going to finish WHO DUNNIT? I refuse to believe it ended there. We need to know the killer. I feel like its hanging.

    STORIES @ ALIFEDIARY

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  22. This kinda story will make me wanna be my daughters roommate in Uni.... nawa o. Opus Pls, Biko, mbok,Abeg I need a love, romantic story that will make me feel the presence of my Boo in his absence... this scary stories will make me start seeing tins if u don't mix it up wit romance. I Love Opus

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  23. If you want love go to DNB stories

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  24. I've noticed your recent entries have taken a darker twist. . .it was a very good read. Way to go.

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    1. Abi o. In fact very soon he will go to the erotica. Side this guy enh?

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  25. At a point,I couldn't even hold my phone to read
    I could feel my hands shake
    Opus is at it again.

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  26. Twisted people walking everywhr, this one don pass be careful.

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  27. Some time the thing we call a joke today might come back later to hunt us. seen a small pecker and a bigger pecker now!But this Buchi is a bastard,inhuman.The reason why it is very difficult to stop cults in school is that some lecturers are into it as well.

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  28. Oh my!!! Twisted Cult bastards. Let's always be mindful of people we step on their toes or play pranks with it might boomerang on us.

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  29. @Opus the baba, make you try tell my honourable BVs that unless you tell us that some stories are true the rest are fictional and it's from the best brains (opus) because I dey vex when some dey comment anyhow.words like God help us, help our children bla bla bla. Lol

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  30. Opus nawwww! Let there be a part 2 where all of them are brought to book. *sobbing*

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  31. No nah? Jeez! Opus there must be a part 2! Those guys must be caught biko!

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  32. No nah? Jeez! Opus there must be a part 2! Those guys must be caught biko!

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  33. Am thinking,we wonder where serial killers and all d evil in d land is coming from..Yes we agree dey all out dere bt I believe stories liike dis fuels it some more...D heart of mine is evil enuf as it is we dnt ve to enjoy d perversity of it some more in stories now do we?... I jst shiver at d mention of d lil gal...I love ur stories Opus bt dis one right here is too dark.....

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  34. *heart of man....

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