Saturday 13 June 2015

HOUSE FOR SALE




2012


HOUSE FOR SALE,
6 bedroom duplex with three living rooms, seven baths fitted with jacuzzis, a garden, two water fountains, sitting on six acres of land.
asking price 10million naira.



Ngo was pleased, she stroked the curtains which her husband had just hung up. Light shimmered in through the windows. She spinned around dreamily. Her kids would absolutely love their new home. She loved the renovation work that had gone on. The property had been restored but it still had most of it's original woodwork and furniture.

She wondered why nobody had bought this house until she and her husband had come across it. From the moment they set their eyes on it, they knew it was the one. And they got it for such a bargain. They were expecting to pay at least five times the asking price.
The front door opened and she heard a shriek... Her kids were home.


Judith ran down the stairs to the kitchen "mummy junior just ate a cockroach" she screamed. Her mother looked at her "Don't tell tales about your brother Judith" she replied.



"It is true" came Jude's voice from up the stairs. Ngo looked at her daughter, her six years old twins were known to be mischievious. They had lived in the house for a week now, and due to the large space in the house, they didn't get into each other's hair and they house had been peaceful.

"Where did he get the cockroach he ate? There are no roaches in this house" she dismissed her. Junior was four years old, and well behaved.

"He just....." A scream and a thud interuppted Judith. They ran up they stairs together.

Junior was lying on the floor in their room, and his body was having spasms. Ngo screamed and held her child, while his siblings watched on, obviously frightened.

"Get me my phone...." Ngo screamed.

Ngo watched Junior keenly as he ran around the garden with a kite. After yesterday's incident, she didn't let him out of her sight. The doctor had said he was alright, because by the time they got to the hospital, he had simply seemed to be sleeping.

Junior sat on the ground, and talked to his friend. He liked his friend very much. He looked up and saw his mum staring at him. His friend whispered into his ears, and he laughed.

Ngo watched Junior laugh, and wondered since when he started talking to himself. She went to him. "Baby who are you talking to?" she asked him.

He put his hands to his lips and made a sign for her to be quiet. Then he pointed and said "Micheal.....My friend Micheal"

Ngo looked in the direction he pointed, but saw nobody. She looked at her son, and he smiled at her so innocently. She stood up.

Jake walked into his house, and a shiver ran through his spine. His kids saw him, and ran to give him hugs. He saw a fourth child, about Junior's age standing by the stairs and staring at him. In a blink, child was gone. He was dressed in girl's clothes.

The family was having dinner, on the ornate dining table which was part of the original pieces in the house. The chandalier above the table started blinking, and the table started shaking, falling the glasses to the ground. Judith screamed and everyone was frightened but Junior sat there with a calm smile on his face.

"Strange things are happening in this house" Jake told his wife as they prepared for bed. She dismissed his worries, saying maybe it was an earthquake.
Earthquakes do not happen in Nigeria but Jake dropped the subject.


Ngo opened her eyes, the room was pitch black. Her husband stirred by her side. Something had woken her up, but she didn't know what it was. She heard footsteps running through the corridor, and the curtains to the windows were opened. A ray of moonlight, and Ngo saw a woman standing by the window, looking out to the street. The woman waved to someone outside, and turned around. Ngo shut her eyes tightly.

The woman walked to her side of the bed, and peered into her face. Ngo did not open her eyes, but she could smell her. Ngo smelled death. The woman walked through the door, and Ngo heeved a sigh of relief.

Jude stood up sleepily and made his way to the toilet. He opened the door, and saw the boy in a yellow dress, sitting on the toilet seat. Jude's mouth fell agape and he screamed.

Ngo and Jake ran into the children's room, and saw Jude dangling like a rag doll in the air. A strange boy about Junior's age sat on the toilet seat, with an angry face. Juditha had woken up, and was shaking on her bed. Junior was not in the room.


Then the woman glided into the room, holding Junior's hands. Ngo started crying. "Who are you? Leave us alone.... leave my children alone" she screamed launching at the woman. Jake tried to hold her back, but the moment she touched Junior, an electric spark sent both of them flying in different directions.

Juditha screamed "Jesus!!" and Jude fell to the ground lifeless. The woman and the strange boy disappered.

Three days later, the family sat around Jude's bed in a hospital, he was in a coma. Ngo had a plaster caste on her right arm, which she had dislocated due to the fall. They all looked shaken. All but junior that is. Junior had been behaving like he was a machine in motion.

The doctors had examined him, and said he was perfectly healthy. Ngo was worried. Junior had this dazed look on his face. Jude coughed and the machines attached to him started beeping. He was awake.



Finally they called their pastor. They hadn't been in church for a while, but this was the last resort. The pastor knocked on the door of their suite in a hotel, and Ngo opened the door.
"Why are you here with him? Who are you?" he asked looking in Junior's direction.
Without even a hello to the rest of them, he began praying.

Junior stood up and walked towards the pastor with a defiant look in his eyes "leave my friend alone" he said in a voice not entirely his. The pastor lay the Bible on his forehead, and he fell to the ground.

He began convulsing, and shaking. His family watched in fright as nails began falling out of his mouth.




1881

She looked outside the window, it was quiet outside. It was quiet inside. The child stared at the knife in his mother's hands, blood dripped to the tiled floor. A fly buzzed by the window, the knife slashed through the air and the fly fell to the ground. The child picked up the fly, put it into his mouth, chewed and swallowed.


The clock chimed six times and breakfast was served. Mother used the good china. Through out dinner, nobody spoke a word. Mother combed father's hair, and the boy watched as the hair left his scalp and clung to the comb. Some fell into his soup, but mother didn't mind, neither did father. He finished his dinner and mother excused him from the table.

 He went up the dark stairs, and into the even darker hallway. He closed his ears with his hands as he passed by the door yet he heard the whispers. He stopped and reached for the knob. As his hands closed over the knob, a hand reached out to grab him through the door, with a screech. He stepped backwards and clutched the silver cross hanging on his neck.


She hummed as she sat her husband in the parlour. She put his cigar in his hands and lit it. Then she sat on her rocking chair, stoked the fire and looked over at her husband. A worm crawled out of his eye socket and she reached over, picked it off his face and put it in the plate on the table. The plate was full of worms. She continued humming and set to work knitting mittens for her daughter.

The light flickered in the room and the child was one the floor tossing and turning in evident anguish. Mother knelt by his side and wiped his brow with a cloth. Her lips moved silently as she prayed for her daughter. His face contorted and his mouth opened. Mother pinned him down, as he thrashed around violently. Then with a high pitched screech, she was flung like a rag doll into the air, to a wall, then unto the floor. The child slowly ascended, mid air until he was standing on air. Then his eyes went open. Mother screamed "NO!!"


The sun was rising, and the child opened the front door. He was dressed for school, and ran to the curb where the school bus was waiting. He looked back at the house, looking to the window of the parlour where mother stood. He waved at her and got into the bus.

A worm slithered out of mother's mouth, and fell into a plate on the floor. She was swollen and putrid, she had been dead for 8days......




2015

HOUSE FOR SALE,
6 bedroom duplex with three living rooms, seven baths fitted with jacuzzis, a garden, two water fountains, sitting on six acres of land.
asking price 6 million naira



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SO CHOOSE WISELY
ENOUGH SAID




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70 comments:

  1. Opus na only u waka come dis night. Haba!!!

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    1. hahaha. don't be scared ooo.

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    2. I just watched 'insidious 2', now watching Lazarus effect and the power fluctuated so I decided to drop by and now I've read this too. And I'm home alone....i don't mind though. lol

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    3. Psycho.
      I'd like to be friends with you, Tamia.
      Please send your pin or WA number to spakleenmom@gmail.com
      Fret not, hun.
      I'm straight.

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    4. I'm at a loss for words, Opus.
      I just wanna pull your ear.

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    5. You're straight? What a shame...lol.

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    6. Ahhhh.
      lol

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  2. Biko, it's too late for this. To be continued tomorrow.

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  3. Hunted house, opus u r Beginning to scare me how do u came abt this stories?

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    1. Na mistake na...I think It wasn't intentional

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    2. A mistake u say? Wt about *this stories???

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    3. Lol. Anon biko leave my jenny alone!

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    4. Loooool.
      Anon!
      smh

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    5. Hawt Mrs, the anon obviously has nothing to comment on the story.

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    6. True that.

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    7. Opus has a way with narratives.. this one is really scary.

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    8. Opus has a way with narratives.. this one is really scary.

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    9. Lol...the price keeps coming down.

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  4. I don take cover, make day break first.

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  5. Anon 006 u should knw its auto wahala hian oooo
    To make u happy COME, oya fix it in d right place, 2 much sabinus u could easily ignore u knw!
    Won't kill if u did.

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  6. I will read you in the morning ok. Gdnight

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  7. Kilode? After enticing us with Amaka and Celestine and pastor Bosco and Kollupia you want us to be reading horror stories ever day now ba? I hope you are feeling much better now. Abeg write something that will fit this 'weather for 2' season that we're in. Biko

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    1. Nawaoh 4 u ! weather for 2? you better go and farm now so that the weather will grow your crops later .

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  8. Bia Opus,u know there's no light in this part of the world and you are bringing up this horror movie at this time.

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    1. Lol. I've learnt not to read Opus stories at night. I cannot shout abeg. And no man to grab when I'm scared.

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  9. This ur story reminds me of a "very-beautiful and big" house that has been for sale for a long time somewhere in ogun state...so many ritual stories trailing the house.

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  10. hahahaahah. fear ko, fear ni. It's not dat scary na. Ive watched and read worse by this time. Lolz.
    Abeg Opus, dat story about that lady dat wants to take revenge on her sister or so, concerning kingdom something something, u see its been long, can barely remember the story line again, its ancient though. Biko complete the story please, so many stories left uncompleted. Ojugwu and the big d**k guy nko? Opus we know you are trying but please complete them abeg.

    pamscrib.blogspot.com

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  11. Opus, Adonbelivit! How could you? I was reading this story at night and even though the whole place was fully lit, it felt like I was watching a horror movie in the dark!!! All those creepy crawlies coming out of different corners of body crevices. I command you to slap yourself twice! Awight, maybe that was a bit too harsh but I repeat, you are one hell of a hot mess and I Lurves (Love) it. Keep it coming! Ojigbijigbi, Lawdy lawd!

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  12. Scary haunted house in Nigeria? Really scary.

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  13. Haunted house stories. Omo esu! And the home price keeps coming down. Next family! Some people no dey sleep? Lol!

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  14. Lesson: Mara,make sure you're not eating when you decide to log on to opustjk!

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  15. Abeg I'm going to buy this house. Lol

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    1. Lol buy the house and gather MOG to deliver the house and live peacefully on top your 6million dream house.

      Nmaojike.com

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  16. I'm putting my foot down! Who dunnit isn't over. Habiba deserves some justice. Hi! If you enjoy reading , please visit this site http://amhabyba.wordpress.com thanks very much

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  17. Hahahaha. The last paragraph got me laughing. 6m. Very soon, it will be free. I will buy it. Then gather MFM for deliverance sessions.

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  18. Hmmm...was just imagining the story in ma mind eyes. Holly wood needs to use this story for a movie. Opus, ride on.

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  19. Ghosts and Evil. If them go sell for 1 million I go buy turn am to church headquarters for mountain and fire ministries make them see whether them strong.

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    1. You are so right! And the house would be sanctified and certified HOLY. Happy Sunday.

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  20. Opus, u av not finished d Ring story, n d Who Dunnit Story and now dis one. I love horror movies but I also hate suspense. Pls help me, am waiting. Kudos nice job!

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  21. Not all that glitters is gold!

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  22. Not all that glitters is gold!

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  23. Hei God. I read this in the afternoon and I'm scared AF! I will remember this at night. *wailing*

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    1. And who is the damned demon putting the evil house on sale? Ehn? Demolish the bloody thing na! Demolish it!!

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  24. Opus, remember WHO DUNNIT??? Need to know the end.

    STORIES @ ALIFEDIARY

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  25. Creepier by the day. Your mind spins these stories like a spider does its Web. Keep it up, but pretty puhhhleease, finish amaka and egochoppings and others you left hanging I beg you. More wicked imaginations to your mind.

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  26. 6 million ke! one kobo i no buy self even dash, not for me!

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  27. Opus keep it up. Am loving your story lines.

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  28. Opus if you think that i will forget Amaka,Olukwu,Pastor Bosco,who dunit and the rest, you are mistaken! I want them as soon as possible!

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  29. Opus! Opus!! What u r doing is nt fair oo horror stories 4 night haba u dnt want us to sleep abi it ok, pls I miss Amaka ooo ehen pls I am waiting 4 her wedding

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  30. Opus! Opus!! What u r doing is nt fair oo horror stories 4 night haba u dnt want us to sleep abi it ok, pls I miss Amaka ooo ehen pls I am waiting 4 her wedding

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  31. fear fear....na to use anointing oil spray the house and flush out na #deliverancethings....hahaha but honestly these stories can mess up imaginations at night...imagine you on the bed at night, waking up to go pee and seeing a woman going through the wall and waving at ya....

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    1. Close ur eyes and open them again....she'll be gone

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  32. Been watching horror movies since i was 'lil ......and alone too ...my sisters prefer nollywood..*rollseyes...it's better to watch them at night and if it's during d day, close the curtains and doors and switch off the light......but since i grew up to know it was all film trick and no one really dies and d zombies were all make-up, i lost interest......it now feels like watching one tree hill.......but give me blood and carnage anytime.....nice write up opus

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    1. Hey,did we grow up together??? I can bet this is exactly what it was like for me,watching horror movies and yeah..gimme blood and carnage anytime.
      As for you Opus,I luff u coz you keep on getting better and bigger by the day!!!!!

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    2. Hey,did we grow up together??? I can bet this is exactly what it was like for me,watching horror movies and yeah..gimme blood and carnage anytime.
      As for you Opus,I luff u coz you keep on getting better and bigger by the day!!!!!

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    3. Hey,did we grow up together??? I can bet this is exactly what it was like for me,watching horror movies and yeah..gimme blood and carnage anytime.
      As for you Opus,I luff u coz you keep on getting better and bigger by the day!!!!!

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